Wednesday, 30 March 2016


My family                                         Trains rumble by the class rooms. 
Rumbling and swaying and cracking. 
I touch all tips of things, like metal and soft grass too. 
I notice smells of tasty chicken and tasty chocolate too. 

My land is beautiful 
because it has beautiful rivers 
and lovely silver ferns.

And for my family, I love them dearly 
and I don't want to lose them. 
I will always love them. 
And I feel happy with them. 
I'm so lucky.

1 comment:

  1. I like it i love how you used good language in your writing. I like how you described the scene as well it was very good and I like how you use some personification I like it